The thief
It was with guile you stole my heart,with such soft touch that for my partI did not know what I had lost,nor did I know what love would cost.You scaled the walls of my defenceand sidled past all my...
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Surprised me! I thought it was gonna have a sad ending,and I absolutely loved the little twist you put on this.Nice rhyme and meter. Flows very well. Enjoyed!!! Cherri
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AlylonnaI love the rhyme in this poem, very smoothe. And I love poetry with great ending lines, a sign of good writing:Quote:But not so clever now, my thieffor looking closer I believethat somewhere...
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Quote:But not so clever now, my thieffor looking closer I believethat somewhere in your quest for mineI stole YOUR heart in lesser time!Such a clever thief but he was caught in the end .Wonderful...
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Alylonna - This is a gem! You've captured the irony of a heart pursued. The rhyme, flow and craft of your words intersect seamlessly towards an ending that surprises the reader. That's talent. And it...
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Aww thanks Rick, I'm glad you liked it.guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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Lol Jan you made me smile. Isn't that all love is? A little mutual thievery of the heart, time and soul....guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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Thanks for reading Sharon and I'm glad you liked the ending :)guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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It may yet have a sad ending Cherri!! Who knows what time will bring...I'm glad you enjoyed it though and it's always nice to surprise people.guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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Thankyou for your gracious comments FairEllen. I often feel I struggle a bit with rhyme and meter so your appreciation of them means all the more :)guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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Lol he's always trying to be clever Cusick!! Always fails miserably at it but I guess that's why I love him :) Thanks for taking the time to enjoy my little ditty.guilt is a monster that lurks in the...
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Well D if I have made one person smile a day then my work here is done :) Thanks for reading.guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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Namyh, you are truly generous with your praise and you made a humble poetess feel very touched this evening. Thankyou for reading and for your kind words.guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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I'm glad you liked it Lynn :) Thankyou for reading.guilt is a monster that lurks in the dark.
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Can relate to this in my own way (BIG HUGS) :)This is that same song again!! What is with this SONG?!!ok, i obviously need another Xanax......(breathe Mikey....breathe)...
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The heart of poetry is HEART, and this is filled with it... Much enjoyed Riv... Bri~From Bri to Dawn*Our love is Our song*
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**~Riv~**Love surely creeps up on us when we are least expecting it, and you're right: sometimes the thief for a heart can go both ways!This was very sweet and I enjoyed reading it! =)
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~Aly~ A delightful read this morning my friend :) Enjoyed your word~weaving and imagery~Thanks for sharing
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